Hi I think there is a need to emphasise the art work and decrease the focus on yourself,keep the same text and speak it more slowly so that the viewer/listener can integrate it. The text itself gives the focus on yourself better than your own image. A very interesting work.
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ReplyDeleteI think there is a need to emphasise the art work and decrease the focus on yourself,keep the same text and speak it more slowly so that the viewer/listener can integrate it. The text itself gives the focus on yourself better than your own image.
A very interesting work.
Mirei (a student from the past)